A bit long maybe (at least in its current format), I'd try to limit it to :90 or so. Make more than one vid if you have more points about life with CF. I would also encourage you to find a student at a local college or university studying film. They almost always need things for their reel and will often do projects for free or low-cost (meal, travel expenses etc.). They can offer more creative ideas and a more professional look as most of them have free access to HD cams with a variety of lenses, or perhaps a steadycam for moving shots, in the end you both benefit. Good Luck!