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Short Amateur Poem

anonymous

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65 Roses I asked my parents for a rose They gave me sixty five With spines like a knife Sharp to steal my life Oh, I can barely thrive But keen to stay alive. Should I've taken from they Or is this the life's way? Its a nightmare to be fair A journey to nowhere But many have a share And show no despair True it'll still be there But to face it, I'll dare By time roses may decay But when no one can say. By: Rami Najjar I know its very amateur but it came to my mind and i thought to write it down. Thanks.
 

anonymous

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You did a good job-what a gift you have. I don't think I could have came up anything like you did. Hang tuff & take care of yourself<img src="i/expressions/rose.gif" border="0">
 

Diane

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Hi Rami, I also liked your poem. good job <img src="i/expressions/face-icon-small-smile.gif" border="0"> ~ Diane
 

anonymous

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Hi Rami, I've had a few poems on CF published over the years. It's great to see you expressing yourself in such an eloquent and beautiful way. Keep it up, even if it's just for you (although you know all of us here will get it too)Debbie22 yr old w/ CF
 

anonymous

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Hi RamiCalvin here from s.a. liked the poem, awesome buddy.It's real and honest!I'm 20 with CFHope to here from you soon
 
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