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Allie

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What I would change:

<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote>Cystic Fibrosis is THE most common FATAL genetic disease among WHITE people</end quote></div>

The more politically correct and genetically accurate way to say this is "Most common among Caucasians and Ashkenazi Jews"

<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote>AFTER they have had a child with this horrile disease</end quote></div>

Horrible

And I'm not sure what you did with HTML, but your wording cuts off after "Most"

glad to help<img src="i/expressions/face-icon-small-smile.gif" border="0">
 
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jbrandonAW

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I don't understand what you mean

"Horrible

And I'm not sure what you did with HTML, but your wording cuts off after "Most" "

I wanted it to be a little harsh and in your face.
But thank you
 
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jbrandonAW

New member
I don't understand what you mean

"Horrible

And I'm not sure what you did with HTML, but your wording cuts off after "Most" "

I wanted it to be a little harsh and in your face.
But thank you
 
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jbrandonAW

New member
I don't understand what you mean

"Horrible

And I'm not sure what you did with HTML, but your wording cuts off after "Most" "

I wanted it to be a little harsh and in your face.
But thank you
 
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2perfectboys

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I don't think Caucasian should be politically correct,, but iI guess it's better than white...When I have to check race and only have choices that say WHITE or Aftrican-Aneriican, Hispanic or Asian, I check other, I think we should have a European-American, and since that is not an opition, I consider myself a native amercian, because I am a native of America, (all my life)
 
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2perfectboys

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I don't think Caucasian should be politically correct,, but iI guess it's better than white...When I have to check race and only have choices that say WHITE or Aftrican-Aneriican, Hispanic or Asian, I check other, I think we should have a European-American, and since that is not an opition, I consider myself a native amercian, because I am a native of America, (all my life)
 
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2perfectboys

Guest
I don't think Caucasian should be politically correct,, but iI guess it's better than white...When I have to check race and only have choices that say WHITE or Aftrican-Aneriican, Hispanic or Asian, I check other, I think we should have a European-American, and since that is not an opition, I consider myself a native amercian, because I am a native of America, (all my life)
 
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sue35

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For some reason I also can't see anything beyond the word Most. I also can't see your whole person story

Also, I agree with Allie about the whole sentence about who gets CF. I like that it is in your face, but to capitalize WHITE seems kind of harsh to me.

Other than that, great job!
 
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sue35

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For some reason I also can't see anything beyond the word Most. I also can't see your whole person story

Also, I agree with Allie about the whole sentence about who gets CF. I like that it is in your face, but to capitalize WHITE seems kind of harsh to me.

Other than that, great job!
 
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sue35

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For some reason I also can't see anything beyond the word Most. I also can't see your whole person story

Also, I agree with Allie about the whole sentence about who gets CF. I like that it is in your face, but to capitalize WHITE seems kind of harsh to me.

Other than that, great job!
 
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jbrandonAW

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Okay I fixed the problem, It was an internet explorer and layout problem. I use firefox so thats why I was wondering what ya'll were talking about. CHECK IT OUT
 
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jbrandonAW

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Okay I fixed the problem, It was an internet explorer and layout problem. I use firefox so thats why I was wondering what ya'll were talking about. CHECK IT OUT
 
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jbrandonAW

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Okay I fixed the problem, It was an internet explorer and layout problem. I use firefox so thats why I was wondering what ya'll were talking about. CHECK IT OUT
 
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Allie

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<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote><div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote> AFTER they have had a child with this horrile disease</end quote></div> Horrible</end quote></div>

Hehe, sorry, I meant, you misspelled horrible.

<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote>These repeated lung infections lead to perminate scarring in the lungs and eventually this will lead to death</end quote></div>

Permanant instead of perminate


<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote> CF builds up mucus is also causes the enzymes in the pancrease to get blocked and doesn't allow them to digest </end quote></div>

CF builds up mucus, it also causes the enzymes in the pancreas to be blocked, not allowing them to digest

<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote>simpling asking for you </end quote></div>

Simply asking

<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote>that trys to restore </end quote></div>

that tries to restore

<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote>to make moving mucus more efficant.</end quote></div>

to make moving mucus more efficient

<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote>letting soak in hot sterial </end quote></div>

Hot sterile

I like the new setup. I'm glad that you're doing this <img src="i/expressions/face-icon-small-smile.gif" border="0">
 
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Allie

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<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote><div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote> AFTER they have had a child with this horrile disease</end quote></div> Horrible</end quote></div>

Hehe, sorry, I meant, you misspelled horrible.

<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote>These repeated lung infections lead to perminate scarring in the lungs and eventually this will lead to death</end quote></div>

Permanant instead of perminate


<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote> CF builds up mucus is also causes the enzymes in the pancrease to get blocked and doesn't allow them to digest </end quote></div>

CF builds up mucus, it also causes the enzymes in the pancreas to be blocked, not allowing them to digest

<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote>simpling asking for you </end quote></div>

Simply asking

<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote>that trys to restore </end quote></div>

that tries to restore

<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote>to make moving mucus more efficant.</end quote></div>

to make moving mucus more efficient

<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote>letting soak in hot sterial </end quote></div>

Hot sterile

I like the new setup. I'm glad that you're doing this <img src="i/expressions/face-icon-small-smile.gif" border="0">
 
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Allie

New member
<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote><div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote> AFTER they have had a child with this horrile disease</end quote></div> Horrible</end quote></div>

Hehe, sorry, I meant, you misspelled horrible.

<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote>These repeated lung infections lead to perminate scarring in the lungs and eventually this will lead to death</end quote></div>

Permanant instead of perminate


<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote> CF builds up mucus is also causes the enzymes in the pancrease to get blocked and doesn't allow them to digest </end quote></div>

CF builds up mucus, it also causes the enzymes in the pancreas to be blocked, not allowing them to digest

<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote>simpling asking for you </end quote></div>

Simply asking

<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote>that trys to restore </end quote></div>

that tries to restore

<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote>to make moving mucus more efficant.</end quote></div>

to make moving mucus more efficient

<div class="FTQUOTE"><begin quote>letting soak in hot sterial </end quote></div>

Hot sterile

I like the new setup. I'm glad that you're doing this <img src="i/expressions/face-icon-small-smile.gif" border="0">
 
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jbrandonAW

New member
Okay allie I think I fixed all the grammer mistakes. LOL I told you typing with these damn nails!!!!! Its good to know you actually read it though!!!! Thanks for subscibing!!!
 
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jbrandonAW

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Okay allie I think I fixed all the grammer mistakes. LOL I told you typing with these damn nails!!!!! Its good to know you actually read it though!!!! Thanks for subscibing!!!
 
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jbrandonAW

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Okay allie I think I fixed all the grammer mistakes. LOL I told you typing with these damn nails!!!!! Its good to know you actually read it though!!!! Thanks for subscibing!!!
 
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